(It wouldn't fit in the ask box so i had to take a screenshot)
(It's on my iPad because this is my school iPad and it's what we are supposed to do our work on)
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Tuesday, April 29, 2014
Does this writing deserve an A?
I am to wrote an essay in my 9th grade health class on which health component (nutrition, fitness, and stress) seems to be the most important. I chose nutrition. What should i work on/fix? Please give me constructive criticism. I want a really good paper and an A:) thanks!
(It wouldn't fit in the ask box so i had to take a screenshot)
(It's on my iPad because this is my school iPad and it's what we are supposed to do our work on)
Read more: Does this writing deserve an A?
(It wouldn't fit in the ask box so i had to take a screenshot)
(It's on my iPad because this is my school iPad and it's what we are supposed to do our work on)
Read more: Does this writing deserve an A?