Does this writing deserve an A?

I am to wrote an essay in my 9th grade health class on which health component (nutrition, fitness, and stress) seems to be the most important. I chose nutrition. What should i work on/fix? Please give me constructive criticism. I want a really good paper and an A:) thanks!

(It wouldn't fit in the ask box so i had to take a screenshot)
(It's on my iPad because this is my school iPad and it's what we are supposed to do our work on)


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Where can I watch the winx club season 6 episode 11?

I can't find where to watch it and on iPad please and if you can episode 12 and more I will be so happyyy😊

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Is it worth buying the iPad mini retina display?

I've been saving up for a tablet and I don't know if I should get the iPad mini or the retina display for 100 more dollars? I want the A7 chip but I just don't know if it's worth 100 more dollars?

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Will it be practical to buy an iPad 1 (A1337) now?

There is a pawnshop near our place that sells an iPad 1 (A1337) for only Php6000 (around 140 US dollars). But as to my research, you cannot upgrade the os to iOS7. Will this be a problem if ever I buy it an d use it in the future?

I am not an Apple user so I've no idea about this things. I will appreciate it if you will give me an honest answer. Thanks!

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Why does my iPad network say Verizon? Can this be used as a phone or what iam confused?

Why does my iPad network say Verizon? Can this be used as a phone or what iam confused?
Added (1). Is this supposed to mean I can use this is a phone

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Clash of clans account linking deletion help?

I want to put my account on my ipad onto my ipod but my ipod account is linked to my phone and it says my progress will be lost, does it apply to my phones progress too? Be cause it says somewhere they are synced.

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Where to buy an AUTHENTIC Apple Ipad screen replacement?

I have fixed my IPad with a replacement I bought from Amazon, and I am not pleased with the quality. The screen is made of plastic and not glass like the authentic Apple screen. Plus I can see faint lines when using my knockoff screen. I just want to purchase a REAL, GLASS, APPLE replacement screen for and IPad 3rd gen. Where do I get one?

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Do we still get PCs?

Now with the iPad and a number of tablets already in use by many people, do we still get a PC for our own use?

Is it still worth learning certifications like CCNA. CCNP, Netowork+, A+ or RHCT?

Or should we start learning and using tablets?

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Paypal Dispute help scam?

So basically I sold a few thing on ebay well, 2 weeks a ago I sold my ipad mini on ebay for $263.00 and today I woke up to an email which said the buyer has not received the item but I put tracking information and I was looking around for help and they said I was going to loose the case due to not putting signature on the package I need help can I really loose the case for not putting signature on the package also the tracking says it was delivered. Has anybody had this happen to you if so what was the outcome

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How to transmit external software into an ipad?

Is there a way to transmit external software into an ipad?

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